Item: My eternal hate for the Gods
Rating: 5
Author: Iam_hastur

Iam_hasturLv41yr

2023-10-27 11:04

I'll start with the single flaw of this masterpiece: the arrangement of grammar isn't very fluent right now, which caused me to have difficulties, though I believe some editing can remedy that. Aside from that, the narrative features a fantastic take on the demon cliche and a fast-paced plot. I love the fights, although I want to see how the demon lord is related to the elf. And like a previous comment, I would agree that Thorkell is a fitting name for the demon lord's host, and much thought was put into the world's background. I can't wait to see where you take this; overall, I shall give it 5 stars because I see a lot of potential. Overall, the novel is incredibly enjoyable, and I can't wait to read more as each chapter drops one by one. The best two days of my life in a while, that much I will say.

My eternal hate for the Gods

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