Item: Abyssal Sin System
Rating: 3.8

JSFwaawLv11yr

2023-06-19 01:34

I don't write reviews very often. So I don't know exactly what to write. English is not my first language. So I won't criticize the work too much, but let's get started: - I have read only 10 chapters (at the time of release) the idea is good, but the system and the world itself have not yet been revealed for sure.. - Gg is a weakling, and he has a system that makes him grow in terms of strength.. - The world hasn't been revealed yet (it's probably too early), they don't talk too much about friends. - As for the readers, it's better to judge for yourself, there are 10 chapters. It won't take long. (there may be mistakes in the comments, English is not even my second language, sorry.)

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