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Blessing_O
Blessing_OLv141yr
2023-03-19 17:12

This is my first Sci-fi novel, and I love it. Still wondering what Xadia is though🤔 I like how the story is progressing and looking forward to his adventures as a hunter and the unmasking of his identity and ability 🤩

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LazyErosage
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Upon reading your content, I noticed that there are some grammar errors and the main character's name isn't sticking enough. While this may make it difficult for readers to fully immerse themselves in the story, it's important to remember that these things can be fixed with a little bit of editing and revision. My advice to you would be to go back through your content and carefully read each sentence to ensure that it makes sense and flows smoothly. You may also want to consider using tools such as Grammarly or Hemingway to help catch any errors you may have missed. Additionally, try to think about ways to make your main character's name more memorable, such as giving them a unique nickname or tying their name to a key aspect of their personality or backstory. Remember, writing is a process, and it takes time and effort to create a polished and engaging piece of content. Keep working at it, and don't be afraid to ask for feedback or seek out resources to help improve your skills. With dedication and perseverance, you can create a truly captivating story that will keep readers coming back for more.

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Jinx_Lee
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Transmigration and Reincarnation story always caught my interest. I love this, keep up the good work! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Annabaibeauthor
AnnabaibeauthorLv14

Congratulations. As an author, I admire writers who write the SCFI genre. Hats off and looking forward to reading more from you. I know you are working on editing the novel in terms of grammar and am rooting for you. Cheers

1yr
Little_feelings
Little_feelingsLv2

Nice story but needs more editing.. ... .

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AMonarch
AMonarchLv2

This novel is a true masterpiece that will leave a lasting impact on readers. The author's beautiful prose and richly drawn characters create a world that is both captivating and immersive.

1yr
Sagittarius_Dev01
Sagittarius_Dev01Lv2

This is awesome 👍, keep it moving blud. I love how you make the characters interacts with themselves, it's like a fragment of yourself 😊. I LOVE THIS ❤❤❤

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