Dont ask why i reviewed 5 star. It’s tradition

Really nice story so far. Even though I haven't reached the point were action really starts... I like how understandable Romano is. Also great descriptions and nice dialog so far... Can't wait for the story to get longer.

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A very reminiscing story for me as it brought back memories. I hope for character development as I like reading stuff like that. The Grammer, lettering, and punctuation are all on point.In summary I hope to read more of this book in the future.

Interesting setting, and I wonder if he previous life has any connections with his new one. Being an experienced accountant in his previous life could prove to have interesting situations brought over into his new. People who are interested in these kinds of fantasy should give it a try. Interested to see what'll come in future chapters.

Disclaimer: I only read up to Chapter 18.What I liked: The start was great. And I especially appreciate the effort of Author to write well. Some parts may not translate well due to unnecessary flowy words, but the intent behind is always presented well.Why I stopped at Chapter 18: It's getting confusing, too many little details and not much getting explanations. I felt like the MC, very frustrated at having many questions and they're just piling up with no answers in sight.Why I still recommend you to give this a try: Like I said, it had a great start. And maybe I just gave up too early. Just because I can no longer follow, doesn't mean you can't too. Give it a go, it might get better and be exactly your cup of tea. And quite frankly, this novel is still a lot better than the majority out there. And I have the utmost respect for writers who can come up with the imagination and courage to publish their stories. Thanks for a good read and keep it up, Author! 😽

That first chapter was great! I wasn't even sure who the main character was going to be, and it did a great job of pulling in my interest. The writing quality is solid, and just by reading the start, I can see that the author is great at building tension with just a few paragraphs. I can't speak much to the stability of updates, world background, or characters yet, but I'll definitely be back to check this out as more chapters are released!

Amazing background story and character development. Good job author.

What a gripping first chapter! The writing is so detailed and immersive that I felt like I was in that secluded alley on a rainy night. I could clearly feel Ralph's helplessness while he aimed the gun at Romano. The MC, Romano, is also quite an interesting character. Just the fact that he was utterly calm and calculating while still being held at gunpoint speaks a lot about his character. The writing quality along with the grammar was pretty well done. Although there were slight grammatical and punctuation errors, they can be overlooked. At the very least, readers won't have to sacrifice their brain cells trying to read this novel. Since this is only the first chapter, I hope that the author can update regularly. Moreover, I am expecting a lot in terms of story development. From what I've read about the character, he is calm, calculating, and extremely patient. Nothing to add about the world background, since—like I said—it's only the first chapter. But I hope the author can surprise the readers. If the first chapter is any indication of how the story will unfold then this book will definitely be worth the read. Good luck and cheers!

A good novel, although some parts erked me off, the wonderful world-building and settings made up of these little things. Good job