You'd expect a more logical setup, like being part of a clan or having some kind of background, but instead the protagonist was adopted by Tsundade, without showing any of his past. There's no explanation as to how poison can bypass the supposed invincible power of Infinity, the only abilities that should be able to do this are those like to Kamui. There's no interaction with the system or the protagonist training, Instead of exploring the potential of these interesting abilities, we're left with a bland protagonist who magically becomes overpowered simply because he has a system or something, but the system is never actually shown, So what's the point of having incredible abilities if they're never properly utilized or explored? The protagonist's personality is as flat as a pancake, He lacks any goals or beliefs of his own, conveniently transforming into the "protector of Tsunade" and mimicking Kakashi's character traits, but instead eats candy. Furthermore, the excessive use of swearing by every character, and not having any respect for even the Jonin of the village is not realistic at all and becomes annoying. The numerous grammar mistakes and missing words throughout the novel are, make this unreadable, and some parts of the plot that make no sense, while lacking crucial details. The ninja test in the story is boring, Rather than focusing on the protagonist and his journey, we're subjected to pointless and meandering dialogues that probably exactly the same in the original or some other fanfiction. Then the protagonist randomly blows up a forest, never trying to hide anything, instead he shows his power to everyone, even though he claims earlier that he wants a peaceful life, which is something that was never interesting or believable in the first place.
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LIKEHe didnt read it, he didnt even get past the synopsis There is no system, no natural Rinnegan, but I have the strength template of Gojo Satoru.
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