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The writing quality itself could be better in a few ways like fixing a few grammar mistakes here and there with also some extra spaces being used in a few of the paragraphs but the usage of words are definitely good. The story development seems a bit slow paced as to how I see it, but I am used to fast pace but I don't know myself but France is definitely having a hard time with Noelle's body and it also seems that the others characters in the story don't trust Noelle with even a single droplet which makes it hard for future development. The rest like character design and world background is pretty well made, there are a lot of descriptions for each character and the world around France/Noelle and over all the novel is great and if you want to pass the time this is a novel you should definitely read.

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A Nobody's Transmigration

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