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Roguepalace
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2023-05-27 06:25

To be honest, gonna have to drop this. From the first 2 chapters alone the MC really isn’t my thing. also in these type of stories the I expect the info dump (how he transmigrated, what he was in previous life, and possibly some actual events the person he possessed did to earn his status as a trashy person) to be put on right from the get go. Back to the MC, I may be wrong but he said something about being joining MC or making him like him and I have to say that’ an absolute turn off, I can understand not wanting him to kill him but surely if your father hired him as your guard you most definitely don’t take threats from him regardless of how much trash you are, I mean he’s the 1st son of the duke for heavens sake surely that demands a level of respect (this is where info dump about events that could cause this comes to play before it happens). Also from the way he talks he doesn’t sound like he really cares about someone threatening his life so openly.

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Ordki_Hozei
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I see that this isn't your thing but can I defend your statement? I'll just write it either way. First of all, it's sad that you've dropped this. Second, to answer your question about info dumps, they will appear between 20 chaps. Honestly, in that specific chapters, the answer you will be looking for is there. There's also a hint there as to how 'he earns his status trashy person'. Now, the reason I didn't do it is because some of the readers like others didn't like info dumps in the first few chapters such as chapter 2. It wasn't also my thing but there were also other people who liked to know it at the very beginning which is why I did it in the chapters where it wasn't too early to know about it, at the same time, not too long to inform the readers. Third, as for the sentence 'joining mc or making him like him', I absolutely don't have any idea where I had written that in the first 2 chapters or I do which in the second chapter where Noelle said 'How would Isaac will begin to trust me' or something. Now there's a clear difference between the two. He didn't specifically say 'he wanted to join mc or make him like him'. Since he was transmigrated into a trash character, he had to do something but he didn't leech off toward the mc or try to be like him. To add, Noelle knew the mc. I mean, the synopsis already showed to you, right? Fourth, as for Isaac, who is the mc of the Unyielding Hero who threatened Noelle (Mc) when he's the son of the duke, and you want to kill him because of those threats and wanting of respect? First of all, Noelle(France Neemon: used in synopsis) as I said, knew the mc(Isaac) and the reason I didn't show it in the first few chapters was that not all readers liked info dumps on the first few chapters. Second, as you read, you'll get to see how he formed his trashy reputation. And I already said previously it isn't my thing since I liked it where it was progressively showing rather than blatantly saying it face to face. As for respect? Well, you know... I just said it. Fifth, and the last, I think? In the last sentence where you said 'Also from the way he talks he doesn’t sound like he really cares about someone threatening his life so openly', you are right. Well, that's because he can understand their sentiments about the body he transmigrated into especially Isaac. As the mc of the previous book he had read, of course, he would do what a normal dude would do when applying for a job especially if it's guarding. He will do a bit of background checks for his clients etc which is why Noelle had said in the first chapter where Verl(Noelle's father) arranged a setup where he can get the first impression of him(France or Noelle) which is followed up by a paragraph where Noelle(France) had stated that he didn't want to mc to have a bad impression of him. Am I making sense? Oh, afternote, I do understand your opinion. You have different tastes and I have mine but, seriously though, I'm quite saddened about the review when, in my understanding, you just read 2 chapters. At least read 10 chapters so that you can see a clear view of what was happening? Not mean to sound rude. And since the mc has knowledge about the 'book' he transmigrated into, he would obviously do what it takes to use it on his side which is why his actions had reasons even though (spoilers:) he's just a normal office worker on the previous life, but as a human being, he will do what it takes to survive. (spoiler) He even wanted to go back to his previous world but due to circumstances, he can't. Oh, this is the very last one, if this somehow changes your opinion about the novel, pls do continue reading it. Maybe you'll change your impression of it? Have a good day!

Roguepalace
RoguepalaceLv14

Hmmm, the points do answer some irregularities but just to confirm because you did talk about it but not directly, my main issue is if he did plan to join the MC which you’ve hinted that you never wrote (so hopefully he doesn’t), but also I will continue but it’s just the MC basically going ”okay I know the previous owner did something bad so I don’t mind my appointed bodyguard threatening my life” thing in the 2nd chapter that turns me off, can I hope that this dynamic changes?

Ordki_Hozei
Ordki_HozeiAuthor

To answer the main issue you were talking about, no, absolutely not, but in retrospect, Noelle wanted the mc(Isaac) to join him instead because he knew there were problems coming forward as he ventured and he wanted to acquire people that could help him. As for the second one where the bodyguard's attitude changes, of course, it will. I'll assure you this one. Their relationship gets better as Isaac(mc of the book) discovers more of Noelle in the future. And thank you for being a reasonable reader. I don't really mind talking about the bad points of the books and I do hope in the future you can keep asking for your opinions related to it what you taught badly so that I can avoid those mistakes. Thanks and have a good day!

Roguepalace:Hmmm, the points do answer some irregularities but just to confirm because you did talk about it but not directly, my main issue is if he did plan to join the MC which you’ve hinted that you never wrote (so hopefully he doesn’t), but also I will continue but it’s just the MC basically going ”okay I know the previous owner did something bad so I don’t mind my appointed bodyguard threatening my life” thing in the 2nd chapter that turns me off, can I hope that this dynamic changes?
TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv6

dude, 2 lions cannot rule one jungle

Ordki_Hozei:To answer the main issue you were talking about, no, absolutely not, but in retrospect, Noelle wanted the mc(Isaac) to join him instead because he knew there were problems coming forward as he ventured and he wanted to acquire people that could help him. As for the second one where the bodyguard's attitude changes, of course, it will. I'll assure you this one. Their relationship gets better as Isaac(mc of the book) discovers more of Noelle in the future. And thank you for being a reasonable reader. I don't really mind talking about the bad points of the books and I do hope in the future you can keep asking for your opinions related to it what you taught badly so that I can avoid those mistakes. Thanks and have a good day!
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Shankss
ShankssLv4

Isn't two tigers can be on the same mountain and lions don't even live in jungles.

TheAncientOnell:dude, 2 lions cannot rule one jungle
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