I don't like this book there are so many things missing here how does he get stronger by reincarnating why does he act the way he does to everyone why is he so impulsive why doesn't he consider consequences why are so many characters acting like they did nothing wrong why so many secrets whats with none of them being able to admit when they are wrong i like the idea the story has promise but there are so many things that make no sense and are not explained akuna or whatever her name was is her only purpose to open the gate and keep people their? waste of a character mc could have been kinder to her get her to love him and trust him and then corrupt her to be a loyal servant and then he could have used her knowledge to carry out his plans and used her for his sexual desires as he is a demon at heart and they are very lustful same with sister, sister is supposed to have knowledge about the working of their village and if not then acquainted with people who know the working of the village and use them to conquer and use the village for whatever purpose for a demon as powerful as he was you would think he would understand the value of manipulation and using people to his advantage but he has this false feeling of superiority when he himself is a human now the things i listed above is a general idea of what can be changed to make this story better he needs to understand the value of manipulation whether it be to gain loyal people that can provide information and fulfill his sexual desires as he is a demon at heart (could include the body's sister there too if you want) and other things or just manipulation of emotions so he can gain support of masses, control of his emotions/desires and understanding that actions have consequences how can he destroy that many souls with no consequences from the celestials and divines and such I believe thay once you work on these you will be on part to having a better story THESE ARE MY OPINIONS EVERYONE HAS THEIR OWN FEEL FREE TO DISAGREE (i read all chapters as of 8/4/23 (d/m/y)) (i apologize for this being so long and for any grammatical mistakes i made but i genuinely want to see this story be successful so i just gave some criticism about things I believe would help the story.)
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