Well..., please remember that English is not my first language sorry if I have made a gramatical mistake. From what others told me, my grammar is pretty decent and is readable. The truth is that I liked this idea pretty much. I always liked Neville's character, he was in a way quite authentic and I think many can identify a bit with some aspects of his life and personality. And well, giving a good development to his character to improve even more than what we saw in the movies or books seemed interesting to me, and doing it in a more entertaining and uncommon way also enthused me. I hope you enjoy the story.

This is Gold, its so rare to find a fanfic of Neville Longbottom time-travel [img=update][img=update][img=update] So far it's great..., just more chapter please

I really like the idea....................

I like the plot, and so far it's going well, I'm looking forward to see how it all develops and how Neville progresses at Hogwarts.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Te diste cuenta que tu libro de snape perdió su esencia y por eso dejaste de recibir tantas piedras de poder creo que eres un escritor increíble pero no se si un libro de neville haga lo que hiciste con tus 2 libros de snape los cuales estaban geniales Creo que te va mejor en los oc Reencarna dentro de un mundo que ya conoce espero otro de esos libros este de neville no esta mal pero soy más afín a oc reencarna o self insert