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LazyErosage
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2023-03-06 17:48

"This synopsis is a captivating blend of science fiction, action, and revenge. The character's journey from vulnerability to strength is inspiring, and the idea of a powerful weapon like the Godblade adds an element of excitement to the story. Your synopsis shows great potential for a compelling and engaging novel that readers won't be able to put down. Keep writing, and don't let anything hold you back from bringing this incredible story to life!" This is based on Synopsis that I kind of get the glimpse of story. However, based on your opening chapter, it's clear that you have a talent for creating vivid and emotional scenes that draw readers in. Your dialogue is natural and engaging, and your use of descriptive language paints a clear picture of the characters and their surroundings. So... Good Luck 👍

Godblade Avenger

MZAF
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52 Chs

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Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad to know that you find my sypnosis and writing style interesting . This is my first novel so I'm still in the process of learning more through writing.That's why I always try my best to write quality content so my readers would feel the emotions that I want to portray in my book.

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I said it before and I'm saying it again, the writer captures the essence of the problems in modern society dealing with the strong and weak and we get a front row view to the perspective of both. It is absolutely necessary to note down how it is a slow burn process and everyone gets to see how each character develops from varying angles, the story is so well told that you could use multiple means to read it and not still determine the outcome. It doesn't follow your usual cliche that you'd expect in novels like these, it deserves more love than this, kudos to the author for such beautiful use of lexicon and grammatical function. It never gets old nor repetitive. I rest my case.

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I like the beginning of this novel, the good writing concept, and the character design. Keep up author no matter what keep on writing chances are waiting for you in the future. Fighting

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