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TheWanderingBard
TheWanderingBardLv122yr
2023-03-01 15:09

Chapter 1 is off to a great start imo. We clearly see the bond between yin and yang, there's also fairly good amount of thrilling action to not make the reader bored. Furthermore, the author written at a good pace, great grammar(although a few sentences here and there could be rephrased, it doesn't affect the flow and enjoyment of the storyline.), and the plot is interesting and unique. I hope the author keeps up the momentum and produce equally good chaps further on. :D

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