Review Detail of GreedyHuman in Immortality? Nah, I choose to marry instead!

Writing Quality: The overall writing quality is good, but there are some errors and incomplete words that can be spotted. (4 stars) Story Development: The story has a slow pace and is quite boring. In the first 20 chapters, there is no fighting, only talking and romance. It would be better to classify this novel as "slice of life." (3 stars) Character Design: The main character has a likable personality, and I also enjoy his wife's interactions with him. However, some characters feel bland and lack depth. (4 stars) World Background: The author doesn't provide enough details about the world. The descriptions are limited to generic terms like "cave" and "(Mc Name) House," making it difficult to fully imagine the setting. (3 stars) Updating Stability: The author wrote a chapter mentioning that the novel is free, which shows dedication and hard work. This deserves a 5-star rating. (5 stars) Evaluation: The story is decent, but it becomes boring due to the lack of action. It feels more like a slice-of-life romance than an engaging plot. However, I won't drop the novel because of this. Note to the author: I spent 15 minutes writing this review, so please don't remove it, even if it doesn't align with your preferences. I enjoy your other novel, particularly "Stealing the Protagonist's Yandere Lovers." Keep up the good work, and I hope you continue writing it.