Review Detail of Sheizzcoldasice in Immortality? Nah, I choose to marry instead!

Have some commitment on works Author, jfc. Two of your works barely started and here you are adding another.

What barely started both two books before? first book was like 8 months ago and second one was also like 5 months ago. Moreover those books have a definite schedule as told in synopsis. And this one is free book for now so I upload it when i like or have free time, plz comment before knowing all facts.

I read your other two and love how you write villain mc’s. Keep up the great work 👍

Thanks for your kind words, May you have a good and pleasant day.^^

So far I read all three of your books and I liked all three. I hope you keep up the good work I would like to see how this story goes even further down the line.👌👌👌

Thanks a lot for your beatiful words dear, hope my books can always keeps you entertained.

hlo author, so far i have read all 3 of your books and i really like the mmc f all three. these books are great so keep it up. the only issue I have is that in your both the villain mc books you are trying to forcefully portray protagonist as someone disgusting but sometimes I feel that it is Unnatural. i would love if one of the protagonist is someone kind and how our mc will deal with him(not her). hope you keep up the good work

Was online so as well reply, thanks for your detailed review now thing is in my first book of stealing yanderes only First 2 protagonist are described evil as in latest advanced chs mc and new protagonist are not enemies, and they not kill each other plus in next arc there will be female protagonists too. Now as for plot collapses book, here there is only one villain and protagonist planned for now as i dont want to write filler chs of keep introducing new protagonists. here the main use is of eavesdropping genre which affects heroines decision making a lot. it is to tell public that the guy they think is righteous is actually very lustful and shameless(protagonist) when things not go in his favour. I have explained in much detail in that book review comments on my post.

The synopsis is super ... but let's see if the story is also good 😊

dude u got this idea from qiandian?

I’m not criticizing you or anything, not in the description it’s says you disdain NTR and Yuri, while I can understand NTR, I am curious what specific elements of Yuri you dislike, once again, I’m not trying to come after you or anything, I’m just curious

I dislike yuri cuz mc girls having se* or being intimate with each other without Mc’s presence is simply cheating because you must know many girls sleeping at same time with mc is not yuri as it is happening in mc presence that is simply threesome, foursome etc depending upon the number of girls many authors put in their stories. And now comes the second very important point mc being aware that girls in his harem are yuri with each other and doing lewd/intimate things behind his back and he is still ok with it then his personality is one which can be cuckolded/Ntred/push over type… **##because for being cuckkollded the major point is- husband must feel ok even after knowing that his girl is sleeping/cheating with any other person (male/female) behind his back and he not feel there is anything wrong with it. In real life majority of those males which have this fetish has a high chance of ending up failed/submissive/one-sided female dominated marriages. Now i will tell why its cheating-because mc and wife took an oath to live together with each other, and love/cherish other the most. The wife took an oath to be happy with husband/intimate with him in first place and not with other female members/wives in his harem. Now finally the last point i myself not comfortable with it to read/write such genres, its my personal liking.

heii....!!! up this novel

for me it's weird you say that you don't mind that two women with whom you have a 3some sleep together in front of you but not when you're not there it's like saying you don't mind that a man sleeps with your wife in front of you but when you're not there it's no. in the end according to your explanation you also have a type of cockhold fetish and it is stronger because you want to watch it.

Also you must remember this is a fantasy theme book with harem tag in it. And By what i mean by threesome/foursome etc in this context is special situations like say mc reunited with his girls after a long time and the girls cant take it anymore and want to be with mc the very next second, at that time mc will feel focussing on one girl may be be unfair to others so in situations like this only threesome etc happens and during whch the complete mind and attention of girls in act are on mc only and not on each other and mc is also focused on himself satisfying every girl present instead of letting girls satisfyin themselves so there is no breach of trust and thus theres no cheating and now to finally conclude this thing/act only happens occasionally//very rarely and ##only when it happens regularly then it touches the boundaries of cheating, which never happened nor will happen in my novels. If you still can’t understand my point better to drop this instead of expecting stuff like yuri/cheating/affairs etc which will never happen here.

If you look clearly above, my comment was in reply to the person who asked me why i not like/disdain yuri particularly, he just wanted to know my reason and i simply give him my reason with my selective explanation. You yourself think - If you have girls that love you and married you in your harem, they not married your other wives …then why would you want them to be intimate with each other? Why would you want them to give up on you and bond with each other more as they took oath to only love you and be intimate with you not anyone else? Why would you want them to be close to each other while you stand on sidelines? Whether its happening In your presence or without your presence, I dont think anyone would in their right mind do it unless some special reasons like i mentioned in above reply, and if its out of those reasons, I will call it cheating and you can’t describe this feeling as something you are doin for trying new things or to feel excitement as according to me you only doing if you have the cuck sort of fetish. Because thats what it says in its definition which i mentioned in the very first reply way up. Irrevelant replies regarding this, i will directly delete.

Is this op mc?

No, he will keep getting stronger as the story progresses.

thanks for replying. i kinda left the book 1 after 70 odd chapters so i didn't know about the latest development now i will try to read it again. as for the second novel i kinda forgot about it after deciding to wait for some chapters

Don't mind them. I also 100% agree with you. I also hate those things to the bone and kills the mood and ruin the novel. I fully support your view and opinion. Just ignore them and keep up the good work Mr.Author. I am delighted to have the same opinion as you on this matter. I wish you best and hope that you keep on writing while ignoring them and stay true.