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BrianG9677
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2023-07-25 03:08

dropped chapter 74very weak writing 2nd day since start of game MC is at least 5 levels ahead, already has legendary class, has abilities that MC claimed would take years to get and MC said he wanted has a pet already. and MC hasn't even spoken to anyone since started the grindvery weak writing

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JustYus
JustYusLv13

W in my book🤷🏽‍♂️

BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

what speak English

JustYus:W in my book🤷🏽‍♂️
Martikus
MartikusLv13

Brian. My guy. ‘W’ is shorthand for ‘Win’ nowadays. Also, the fact that he was able to get the dragomancer class is due to foreknowledge from time travel. While this is a common webnovel trope, I would like to point out that it does in fact make sense. Giving this novel a single star for it’s length does not reflect all five parameters for review. Have a great day, may it change your heart.

BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

says who

Martikus:Brian. My guy. ‘W’ is shorthand for ‘Win’ nowadays. Also, the fact that he was able to get the dragomancer class is due to foreknowledge from time travel. While this is a common webnovel trope, I would like to point out that it does in fact make sense. Giving this novel a single star for it’s length does not reflect all five parameters for review. Have a great day, may it change your heart.
BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

better things to read Rebirth theif that roamed world Legendary moonlight sculptor tales of demons and gods super detective in fictional world longevity starting from raising chickens 48 hours a day

Martikus
MartikusLv13

As someone who had read a lot more than just that list, I can say that, there are, indeed, better books. Mostly because they are 1000 chapters +. There are three novels that I enjoyed greatly that also haven’t hit 500 yet. Dragomancer, Rise of the Dungeonmaster, and New Genesis Online. All 3 went on hiatus. That being said, they also had some of the best premises I’ve ever seen. They also played out very well in terms of storyline. (Yes, Dragomancer is long, but the storyline is still really well done. It just needs more chapters.) Three of the novels you mentioned I also really enjoy. However, they do have a lot more chapters, so you can remember a lot of things you enjoy. My main gripe here is that Thief has a fairly bad translation (at least the ones I found) and, more importantly, several novels you mentioned have more Noir vibes. This points to a style preference which is clearly lacking in Dragomancer Reborn. Style and substance are different. I’d ask that you re-evaluate this and get back with me… Do you agree?

BrianG9677:better things to read Rebirth theif that roamed world Legendary moonlight sculptor tales of demons and gods super detective in fictional world longevity starting from raising chickens 48 hours a day
Martikus
MartikusLv13

The internet community for the last 10 years, maybe longer?

BrianG9677:says who
FatHitler
FatHitlerLv12

Rise of the Dungeonmaster seems interesting, but i cant find a place to read it. only an amazon book comes up. can u link it?

Martikus:As someone who had read a lot more than just that list, I can say that, there are, indeed, better books. Mostly because they are 1000 chapters +. There are three novels that I enjoyed greatly that also haven’t hit 500 yet. Dragomancer, Rise of the Dungeonmaster, and New Genesis Online. All 3 went on hiatus. That being said, they also had some of the best premises I’ve ever seen. They also played out very well in terms of storyline. (Yes, Dragomancer is long, but the storyline is still really well done. It just needs more chapters.) Three of the novels you mentioned I also really enjoy. However, they do have a lot more chapters, so you can remember a lot of things you enjoy. My main gripe here is that Thief has a fairly bad translation (at least the ones I found) and, more importantly, several novels you mentioned have more Noir vibes. This points to a style preference which is clearly lacking in Dragomancer Reborn. Style and substance are different. I’d ask that you re-evaluate this and get back with me… Do you agree?
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aoi_hoshi_cath88
aoi_hoshi_cath88Lv15

WRITING STYLE: The author’s writing style is impeccable and quite good. The story is well written, can be easily understood, and is not as confusing as the story goes. Although there may be negligible errors that I have seen, they haven't in any way distracted my attention and immersion in reading. STABILITY OF UPDATES: With the author's current update schedule (4 chapters per week), if the update rate goes up more, I'm sure its readers' anticipation will level up, too. As of now, I think the story is getting better after every chapter. I am just 11 chapters away from the latest chapter which I plan to go through. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The story's pacing, for me, has just the right momentum---not too fast or too slow. The author has taken great consideration in building up this story that it gets more engrossing to read and makes you look forward to the momentous progress of our main character in the story. CHARACTER DESIGN: We have an astute and strong-willed main character here in this story whose progress gets better and more promising in every chapter. Even the side characters being gradually introduced into the fray have their own distinctive roles. WORLD BACKGROUND: The world setting is so descriptively rendered based on the main character's interactions within the game world and with the other game characters, where their respective actions are taking place. This is the second book that I have read in this genre which I am enjoying so far; so keep it up, author. You are absolutely doing a great job.

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