Review Detail of krish_patel in Target Beyond the Veil

This was a interesting read. Characters: The characters are good, feel three dimensional and real. The mc is great too. Story development: The pace is a bit slow in the start but the interesting worldbuilding make up for it. Writing quality: It is good but there are some grammatical errors such as there is no capital letters at the start of paragraph. A rewrite would fix it. Overall, if you like fantasy with academy elements then you should give it a try. Good luck and keep up the great work.