Review Detail of SevenZeros in TAMING DARKNESS

Wow... The story is better than my expectations. I could see you put so much effort and time into doing all this writing. The story is interesting but there are times that the story made me bored because my mind didn't ask that many questions about the story. Sometimes the paragraphs are too long and I don't have a problem with that since I'm a nerd but it has been proven that the human mind chooses to read shorter paragraphs because it looks clearer and easier to read than bigger ones. The descriptions are good, even better than most novels but put it in mind that It's harder to imagine, the more information there is, so try to put in the necessary amount of needed information and don't overload because that would put a burden on the readers mind making them annoyed and then stop reading the novel. You don't need to change it because it's already perfectly fine. Good luck my fellow writer and if you have time, can you also check mine? It's called 'Zero Degrees Celsius' and thank you for reading this paragraph of a newbie writer that could only see the mistakes of others not his own. Also, when you read mine please also write a review, so i can be guided better in my path.