This author copied DxD Golden Peerage for the prologue 😂. Changed the Golden Dragon King to the Shadow King. Shameless but I will wait for many chapters and if the story is good I will support this book.

I thought it was good the first few chapters, and then the author or whoever is in charge of the writing decided it would be a good idea to spam "..." every few words and now I can't read it without my inner voice stopping once every few moments. It just ruins the immersion and the grammar started to be subpar. I thought it was an interesting development to have Sung Jin-Woo be in DXD but the process was just ruined. The characters don't act realistically either, and it's just some kind of forced romanced between the two. In my opinion, there's no way that Sung Jin-Woo would ever feel lonely, he's just too mentally strong and advanced for something like that, and he has an extremely strong will. Grayfia also wouldn't really act like this imo, and be more reserved, so it just feels like author forced romance and it sucks.

35 chapters of simpy aids. Trash-tier nonsense at this point in time.

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blatant plagiarism. author with zero creativity. even if you liked and was inspired by golden peerage at least don't copy the chapter word for word.

Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.

In the 64 chapters that this fanfic has, there is not one in which it is shown that this story really had any progress, a supposed protagonist who did not appear in much of the story and when he did he was very irrelevant [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

it's a good story i like it very much I am a grayfia fan so that also the reason I am reading this.also try to add Lilith( wife of orginal Lucifer) to Jin harem and don't drop this midway.

Very short chapters that do not match the publication rate, to add more than 40 chapters and I do not know yet who is the protagonist of this story the title says one but in the story is another 🤦‍♂️[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]