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Phelio_n_Craze
Phelio_n_CrazeLv42yr
2023-04-21 16:48

help author! 3.99 is too low heh heh heh

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some_writer
some_writerAuthor

yes. Help me

Phelio_n_Craze
Phelio_n_CrazeLv4

some_writer:yes. Help me
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

now is 4.0 but still to low. i dont get it. thare are tags. and warnings why they read it .and later one complain and write .bad reviews. nobody force them.

Aaron_Vittore
Aaron_VittoreLv4

the biggest problem with it was that as strong as the Mc is, he let's people beat him up when he could clearly win. it reads more like a crack fic, and the Mc acts to wacky cringe for seemingly no reason. the suspension of disbelief is just too much. it's a turn-off for the most part. and I think other people agree with me, or I'm just a weirdo.

Phelio_n_Craze
Phelio_n_CrazeLv4

It's true but it shouldn't get lower than 4 because there's many worst fic out there compared to this one

Aaron_Vittore:the biggest problem with it was that as strong as the Mc is, he let's people beat him up when he could clearly win. it reads more like a crack fic, and the Mc acts to wacky cringe for seemingly no reason. the suspension of disbelief is just too much. it's a turn-off for the most part. and I think other people agree with me, or I'm just a weirdo.
Aaron_Vittore
Aaron_VittoreLv4

it's a 3 star. but I haven't given anything a 5 star. when I see a 4 or 5 star my expectations are high but then get disappointed. the story isn't bad but the bad parts are apparent enough. point is if it got rid of the cring and made the Mc less wacky it would be a 4star

Phelio_n_Craze:It's true but it shouldn't get lower than 4 because there's many worst fic out there compared to this one
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

hello thare

some_writer:yes. Help me
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Please respond

some_writer:yes. Help me
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Will you come back someday?

some_writer:yes. Help me
Kaseyj1999
Kaseyj1999Lv15

what happens to the novel?

Phelio_n_Craze
Phelio_n_CrazeLv4

What novel?

Kaseyj1999:what happens to the novel?
Kaseyj1999
Kaseyj1999Lv15

exactly it's gone and so are all the novels the author had. they probably deleted them.

Phelio_n_Craze:What novel?
Voids_TrueOverlord
Voids_TrueOverlordLv14

why delete this diamond?

some_writer:yes. Help me
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