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LegalWolf
LegalWolfLv121yr
2023-06-09 05:11

After reading the first four chapters, I found the novel interesting. However, to make the story more interesting for me and the readers to enjoy, you need to check on your spelling as well as the use of the punctuations. If these things aren't checked, readers won't enjoy it. But I really enjoyed it and I love the names of the clans. Keep it up. Don't give up.

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MARSH5MALLOW
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Thanks so much

LegalWolf
LegalWolfLv12

welcome

MARSH5MALLOW:Thanks so much
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