Review Detail of TimEaterOfWorlds in Eclipse Lovegood The Rise of the dark sun

A very intriguing HP story, with high potential. An interesting character which finds himself in one of the best families in HP and one that hardly ever makes it into fanfics. The grammar and spelling is quite poor, and the text is often in large blocks making it hard to read, and when it is in paragraphs they are not cut at the right place. It definitely affects the quality of the story, as well as adding cultivation to the already largely unexplored magic of HP. I’m still interested in seeing where this fic goes and is worth a quick read at least