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TheGoldenShadaow
TheGoldenShadaowLv41yr
2023-04-22 13:45

Your english sucks!! try to use grammerly or chatgpt to improvise your writing

Dragon God of Domination

Power_King_4153
3.8
50 Chs

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Power_King_4153
Power_King_4153Author

I do it intentionally so No one Copies my content

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Hiroton
HirotonLv14

that doesn't make sense, you are turning away a lot of readers due to how hard it is to read your work. it really hurts immersion when it's hard to understand what's written at times.

Power_King_4153:I do it intentionally so No one Copies my content
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Power_King_4153
Power_King_4153Author

I see If you say so I will make The writting Better

Hiroton:that doesn't make sense, you are turning away a lot of readers due to how hard it is to read your work. it really hurts immersion when it's hard to understand what's written at times.
1yr
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Bakuboy
BakuboyLv4

Then it is even more of a problem. Someone can copy it, make the grammar better and put it in the internet to get more fame

Power_King_4153:I do it intentionally so No one Copies my content
1yr
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Daoist890597
Daoist890597Lv1

Never thought the day would come when Issei managed to escape from brainless bashing and having characters development, congratulations for breaking those annoying generic Dxd fanfics norm and writing something refreshing, praise be your eternal glory.

1yr

RedMonkeyDog
RedMonkeyDogLv3

really needs to be proof read

1yr
George_Amil
George_AmilLv4

it is very interesting very variety plot

1yr
Roktah
RoktahLv15

absolutely horrible grammar. 1 star because with free ai spell correction, there is just no excuse for it anymore. use it!

1yr
ArtV
ArtVLv4

One of the best dxd fanfic i ever read before, It's just that the MC is too good to bear the power of domineering, isn't it strange to be recognized for this power, but the MC is not domineering at all 😂

1yr
Daoistws8EVV
Daoistws8EVVLv1

My god, clones? Serious?? not my cup of tea, bye. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] Reply here…

1yr
DragonGod999x
DragonGod999xLv4

Well it's a good read but that world travel threw me off I enjoyed reading his progress early on but him going to dc threw me off the story I skipped those chapters but it's wrong I'd like to see his progress while training just being a dragon and not the other way around those tragedies are unnecessary I would prefer him in just the dxd universe than mixing it with dc I like the story development but that dc part is a meh for me.

1yr
Lichtz_kami
Lichtz_kamiLv4

did heart produce blood or bone marrow..

1yr
Age_number_clock_x
Age_number_clock_xLv4

Very interesting plot with a original idea. Hope this 5 star motivates you to keep going I’ll drop my power stones on you

1yr
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