Bro its an interesting plot but the past 5 ch have been them going on a shopping trip. nothing is happening and all the dialogue in these chaps have been a whole slew of lots of words with no substance.
I recently started finding lots of stories like what you're saying.
And ALL of them has AI or some type of chat/corrector fell to their wording.
And the worse is that crutch only makes lazy authors, that don't put a little bit of effort to make their SKILLS -aka writing better.