ferrofluid magic is good, just don't give him devil, give him sage mode with its help make ferrofluid orbs as truth seeking orbs it would be awesome,(it's just a suggestion, consider it if you like it)

I have read your MHA fanfiction and can say this is as good as that. I hope you will continue this fanfic, it is one of the better ones from just the first few chapters.

tbh it is good .. but it needs a lot more like interaction betwen the character ..and it needs a lot more Description of the scenery and like that and more of it if you can make ... and you need to put more into not making the mc a 1d character ..no he needs to see and intracnt with others and so

The quality of this story is a significant drop compare to the authors other story which is a shame. It rushes through everything, there's a bit of mistakes, and it doesn't flesh out interactions between the mc and other characters which is one of the few advantages of fan fics. My advice? Go back and rewrite from the start and take a slower pace or just drop entirely and wait until you're finished with your other novel and then focus on this one because even giving it 3 stars is being generous

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The book is decent, but I feel that it could benefit from additional details regarding the scenery. It would have been great if the main character had more opportunities to interact with their surroundings. Also, allow the main character to talk more to some of the people around him, not just two sentences and it’s over. Have a more engaging conversation time-to-time.

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Really good book... You just need an editor and this will be perfect

u good ma guy????

always black bulls 😤😤 will still read though 🤣