Review Detail of 7inkz_etls in The Perfect Planner.(GOD)

Item: The Perfect Planner.(GOD)
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

7inkz_etlsLv31yr7inkz_etls

Haven't met racists for long. The way author builds conversations makes you feel like laughing. I mean, the story makes you laugh when Page is talking to her husband. Want to read more. I can also advice the author to explain characters more than white and black. Maybe their height, what they are wearing, etc. Keep up good work author.

The Perfect Planner.(GOD)

Sandra_Antwi_3288

Liked it!

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7inkz_etlsLv37inkz_etls

Author, do add a synopsis also. It helps a lot. Many readers might think your story is not good because it doesn't have a syno.

1yr

Sandra_Antwi_3288AuthorSandra_Antwi_3288

Thank you so much for your review. It hit yesterday about explaining my characters ...thank you

1yr

Sandra_Antwi_3288AuthorSandra_Antwi_3288

Thank you

7inkz_etls:Author, do add a synopsis also. It helps a lot. Many readers might think your story is not good because it doesn't have a syno.

1yr