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The first 300 are great. The characters peak during the first arc. The story was most enjoyable during these chapters. After 300 and until the timeskip, the new harem members are captured the same way. Be forceful, "r", they fall in love, gg. Lots of tell, don't show. Lots of fights that just feel far too long. It does start shifting after the cultivation jump from mortal to immortal. By this point though, the original charm is long gone. It just feels mundane.

Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist

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