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2023-05-21 04:21

3.4 / 5... I like the backstory... I like the introduction of the mc. But sadly I dislike some of the other things. Writing quality is mediocre... not bad but not good either. If I can spot the mistakes then anyone can spot them. Story sadly gets from nice and interesting prologue to cookie cutter generic 1 to 1 copy of the canon story starting with the hunter exam. Sadly the mc is just a weak 19 year old at that point... essentially what Leorio is and his power level is around the same. Updates are also not really stable but hopefully the author keeps his current update schedule. Still this has potential but I can't say great things about the characters or the story development yet since nothing really happened... I will continue to read this and if it's get better and reaches the same quality as the prologue I'll delete this and write a new review... until then this is only a 3.4 / 5. This story has Potential unlike 99.9% of all other HXH fanfics.

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