Review Detail of NyxOuroboros in Crimson Monarch: Endless Journey.

Item: Crimson Monarch: Endless Journey.
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

NyxOuroborosLv1110mthNyxOuroboros

Unfortunately it's very boring to read, it's like watching various NPCs interact without any emotion, even in fights. It is extremely vague and everything is copied from the Wiki, with the protagonist constantly complaining about how weak he is compared to Guy and Milim. Instead of concentrating on Overlord and TenSura, the car puts other universes and appearance, apart from Chat. In any case, the beginning was good and the idea of Overlord and TenSura the same.

Crimson Monarch: Endless Journey.

ChesterCure

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Zipper_BalloLv1Zipper_Ballo

Zenon00125 you're a goddamn idiot what he's trying to say is the characters are ass as f*** this is almost like this story was made by 11 year old. 😭

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Zenon00125Lv2Zenon00125

What do you mean, most if not all characters are game NPCs and others are fictional characters so technically all NPCs I don't understand you hahahahhahaha

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NyxOuroborosLv11NyxOuroboros

Intelligence chases you but you are faster. What I mean is that the author does not know how to interpret the characters in a way that readers feel like we are inside the story, he does not know how to interpret the emotions and the impact.

Zenon00125:What do you mean, most if not all characters are game NPCs and others are fictional characters so technically all NPCs I don't understand you hahahahhahaha
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