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Review Detail of Dubyas in My Unborn Son

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Dubyas
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Despite only having eleven chapters, this novel is very long. Those who enjoy it's story are in for a treat. The quality of writing is very good, only having advanced minor grammatical mistakes. The author is very descriptive and it is hard to get lost or to lose the plot. The third person view is well done, giving the reader good insight into the female lead. The story development is what I would describe as a 'slow burn.' It takes a while for the novel to get going, but you are invested in the character and genuinely wishing her the best. I like faster-paced novels, but I was surprised as to how well it captured my attention. Character design is fairly polished, only missing a few small points. Some character description would be appreciated, but the personality, way of speech, and general outline of each character is done very well.

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My Unborn Son

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Thanks for your review!