It follows the Canon story and Haku just there as a 3rd wheel, I honestly thought it would be different but apparently not. The Grammar is alright at least to me that is, I have seen worse so this is just an average fanfic for me. I understand why you followed the Canon story with Haku there as just a self-Insert character since it's hard to deviate from the main story of there is already a guide for you to follow.
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