Review Detail of Zefyr in Daughter Of The King

My honest review: The first chapter just got from presenting boring chapters with a regular flow to give the Second chapter a never before seen, perfect continuation. It was incredibly smooth and full of suspenseful moments with a bit of action/drama and an actual plot. The third chapter was phenomenal, to say the least, as it gave the reader a chance to breathe before taking it back again and making them feel the emotions and feelings of the characters. Chapter Four was a bit sad, especially Ray'ven's reminiscing the past with her father (that seems to be a piece of SHI, in my opinion). No matter how much you want to protect your daughter for the future that is to come, you can't do something like that to her. But that's exactly what gave me the drive to read further, to see the next scene, chapter, encounter, and to discover more about the story. Dear DarkSun, you're a genius, 5 Stars, no kidding. It was perfect.