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How to begin? The story has potential but is bland and missing some spices. I have read until ch20 so idk what the story is afterwards. But until ch20 I wish the MC was the protagonist Raphaelle, he looks much more entertaining. The story with the current MC is boring. MC is a genius in term of magic but instead of capitalizing on that the story focus on his physical training ? The MC is almost emotionless and kind of robotic. We don’t know a lot about him, we don’t know much about what he thinks, what he likes, what are his aspirations or goals other than « I’ll die on 3-5 years, I have to become stronger ». He compare himself with the protagonist exclusively in physical strength ? Like, hello ?
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Q: "I wish the MC was the protagonist Raphaelle." A: First, excuse me, but who is Raphaelle(?)? I've written 79 chapters so far, but there isn't any character with that name. Q: The story with the current MC is boring/emotionless/robotic A: That guy just dumped in the world where he knows no one. He simply doesn't trust anyone. Not to mention that he lives as a Prince where politics revolves around him. If you read further, ch.20+, you can see his improvement with the people around him bcs he began to trust them bit by bit. Q: The MC is a genius in magic, but instead, the story focuses on his physical training. A: The MC wants balance in his life. He didn't want to depend solely on his Magic. Like what happens if his Mana runs out when facing the enemy? Q: We don't know a lot about him. A: If you read past ch.20+, you will learn about him, even his past life. All in all, thanks for reading.