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YoungMasterDuck
YoungMasterDuckLv21yr
2023-07-29 11:34

It really could have been a good fanfic, unfortunately I lost track of all the time skips. I'm a harem fan, but I didn't understand anything here. Also, the plot itself was pretty thin. Author, if you decide to do a re-write feel free to tag me. I understand that the beginning is hard for everyone, but I wish you good luck for the future. Ps. maybe you should re-read your chapters before you post them, because mistakes like he/she could easily be avoided.

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