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Godfather_Gambler
Godfather_GamblerLv122yr
2023-02-15 06:39

As I delved into the pages of this fanfiction, I found myself immersed in a world of adventure and excitement. The author's writing style was fluid and engaging, and the story flowed seamlessly from one chapter to the next. I was drawn in by the intricate plot, and I found myself rooting for the characters every step of the way. However, as I read on, I couldn't help but feel that something was missing. I longed to see a visual representation of the characters that the author had brought to life so vividly in my mind. Having watched Naruto years ago, I had a clear image of what the characters looked like, but it would have been a great help to have the author's interpretation to compare and contrast. Despite this minor setback, I thoroughly enjoyed this fanfiction and would highly recommend it to any Naruto fan looking for an engaging read. The author's ability to capture the essence of the characters and their world is truly remarkable, and I look forward to reading more of their work in the future.

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Imperial_Writer
Imperial_WriterAuthor

Thanks

LonelyGodKing
LonelyGodKingLv13

TLDR: good read but please send nudes.

Cardude_4
Cardude_4Lv4

yay that is the summary of his comment

LonelyGodKing:TLDR: good read but please send nudes.
SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

question will you have kaguya be added if so then have Mc gain the ability to move to other dimensions which will allow him to go to other worlds like fate and dc. just want the wifus

Imperial_Writer:Thanks
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

before I read do you know if there's any yuri in this not a fan?

Godfather_Gambler
Godfather_GamblerLv12

I don't think it has as I have read it till 30 I didn't smell Yuri

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR:before I read do you know if there's any yuri in this not a fan?
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

cheers for letting me know been looking for new novels 😊

Godfather_Gambler:I don't think it has as I have read it till 30 I didn't smell Yuri
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

man there is yuri in this, it was very disappointing when I got to chap 31 it was good untill here. gotta to remove now

Godfather_Gambler:I don't think it has as I have read it till 30 I didn't smell Yuri
Sarath7980
Sarath7980Lv4

Given you username I guess that reaction was to be expected... At first I thought your opinion might have been homophobic, but your nickname isn't "Yuri is gross", but "Yuri is NTR" This means that you see any involvement with anyone other than the partner as cheating, regardless of gender. But you like harem novels. You aren't homophobic, you're just sexist!

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR:man there is yuri in this, it was very disappointing when I got to chap 31 it was good untill here. gotta to remove now
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Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

if you wanna say I'm sexist that's fine still won't change my opinion πŸ™ƒ

Sarath7980:Given you username I guess that reaction was to be expected... At first I thought your opinion might have been homophobic, but your nickname isn't "Yuri is gross", but "Yuri is NTR" This means that you see any involvement with anyone other than the partner as cheating, regardless of gender. But you like harem novels. You aren't homophobic, you're just sexist!
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