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2023-03-22 09:49

I'm really happy that new people still like this story, I wrote it a while ago and it's still very dear to my heart. Thank you everyone that gives this reading a chance.

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This story is so beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time. It's so sweet and heartwarming because of their love for each other yet also so bitter and heartbreaking because of the pain they've caused each other unknowingly. The author created a lot emotions for it only being less than 40 chapters and that's great! My only complaint is that I wanted to read more of their story together lol The writing quality is great! There weren't any grammar mistakes (any big ones if there were any), at least that I've caught. The texting kind of confused me at first but you get kind of used to it after a while. I would be like who's who at first xD It's not like it was hard to differentiate, my brain just forgot who was who but you can kind of tell just by the dialogue. I read this while it was completed so I can't say anything about the update stability, so I just gave it a 5. I love the story development. I love the idea of soul mates and that it's not always a happy ending even though it's fate. A happy ending has to be worked for. It doesn't just automatically happen or just doesn't work out even if they are soul mates. I also love that they get only a couple of chances to see their red string, so if they miss it, they miss it. Although, that didn't happen to our main couple ofc. It's such a simple story but it's full of feelings and emotions and the pacing was great! It wasn't rushed or too slow in my opinion. It was a great read! I just wish I could read more about them qwq or maybe of the side couples! I would totally read about them! I love their character designs. They are how they act for a reason along with their innate personalities. Sometimes out environments influence what we do and it especially shows in this story. I love the main couple and the side couples! They're all so sweet and have their own role which I think played out well in facilitating the plot. There weren't any OCC moments from what I can recall and you can just see the attraction between the main couple and how they fall for each other. If I say anything else about their love it'd be spoilers so I can't say anymore bc that'd ruin the story! So if you wanna know how their love develops and progresses, read this story! The world background is not much but it was developed enough for this story as it's less than 40 chapters. I don't think there's a need to explain a modern world much and the story explained what was different and that's all we needed so it's fine. As I mentioned before about the red strings in this world can be see but only as a chance. It's a modern world just with the twist of the red strings and how they can be seen but I love it that people can't just constantly see it. Overall, a great read that I highly recommend! This is such an hidden gem and I hope this gets read more!

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