Interesting way of writing. Starting off as diary entries to time skip then getting into more meatier parts. The story has more to the twilight world than the usual forks characters and world. A lot more interesting read.

I think this fan fic novel may have the potential to be one of the best novel on the platform, but also it has the potential for that potential to be wasted. For now, I think the author is doing a good job and he is slowing improving. I like that he took a big risk and did a time skip or a flashback in the climax of the mini arc that the character was with the cullens. I think that the time skip or flashback was completely out of nowhere. But as the minutes pass for me I started to like the action that the actor did, and I think this is what makes this fanfic unique for me. The world building could improve because it has potential. So, for no I put at three stars l, but it could be in the future 5 starts. The only that I just wish to know is what is going to be update stability. Because it sometimes the author goes three days without chapter, but than he puts chapters in the next multiple days fast, and every day he puts chapter. That’s the only complaint for me is that what is the schedule of the novel. Anyway this novel has the potential to be great and one of the best in this platform, and I hope you can continue to do your very best author!👍👍

I thought the story idea was very good, but I'm afraid that the protagonist will be a weakling, I like to see characters evolve by becoming OP, so the question I ask is will the MC be strong?

not even a true fan fiction story due to it being in boring writing in diary form. If it had been in anything but a diary form. it would have gotten at least 3 star's if they took the time to truly write it in first person it would be alot better.

Hi everyone, I am the Author of this little work in progress! Trigger Warning! This Story is not for everyone! I know that most Readers enjoy simple plots where the MC walks through life without anyone being able to stop him, or where MC magically can bang any and all females, as if woman have no mind of their own… Well, I don’t write like that! I am also very lazy and this reflects both in my setting and my MC, if there is an easy way to solve a problem then why not use it? I hope you all can enjoy the story but don’t expect this to be an easy read you have to actually think a bit. I am sorry for demanding this of you in your free time.

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