As the shameless Author I give 5 star ✨ review . Greetings to the reader who have time to read my novel . This is my first novel and English is not my first language . There will some mistake but I hope to improve them along the story . I appreciate your honest review . Please give it read

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This is a fun story, the world background is there, and the updates are consistent. The writing could be a bit more polished and a few things are oddly phrased due to translation but overall it is a fun story for someone interested in a more simplistic battle-based tale. The author has his own ranking system as well. Description is interesting at times though I would appreciate if the chapters were long and there was more content in them. One thing that especially could use is a bit more explanation about the setting, environment, and what it looks like. The world background is there when it comes to describing the circumstances but it doesn't make me feel like I'm in the world. I want to know what foods they eat, what their cultures are, what it is like going for a walk outside as the MC, etc. Remember you are not just telling a story but you are also making a world as if you are experiencing it. Everything that would happen in such a story like this should be laid out in the novel. Wishing you the best on your journey writer, cheers.

While being securely rooted in reality, Herat twitches. That is what I noticed immediately throughout the story. This interesting book examines the idea of reincarnation and the perils of a magical universe. The author does a fantastic job of retaining the reader's interest despite the story's plenty of action and adventure. A system that pays players for completing quests is an intriguing idea. In conclusion, this book has a lot of potential and is absolutely worth reading!

i hope you will work on world building and will introduce more fun character's in the story keep doing hardwork 👍

I love the system and the ability to create new bloodlines. The story seems interesting so far with loads of room to explore and expand. Grammatically, the writing can sometimes let you down, but compared to a lot of novels on here it's not really a problem!

I like your book so much author, the synopsis caught my attention.. I really do love it, please do keep on updating

Nice plot, the story of the protagonist becoming the end, very interesting plot, I will be waiting for more chapters to be released in the future.

Very interesting plot. Chapters are short but it makes sense. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work and keep updating!!!!

Reincarnation is a sympathetic soul is a soul that has gone through tremendous pain If it is looking for a cunning and cold hero then this book is your good How old saying goes Don't judge my path if you haven't walked my journey So I recommend this book