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GodOfDogs
GodOfDogsLv41yr
2023-02-28 11:44

Just completley grindelwalds charcter to whoever is reading this review DONT read this story is a generic one where the mc is an o so perfect angel. I was interested because there was another author who started doing it and it was good but this one is just bad.

Harry potter :Stifen Grindelwald

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Gabriel_Gamer_8980
Gabriel_Gamer_8980Lv2

Isso não e um Grindelwald nunca, isso e protagonista coxo e fraco, jamais será um Grindelwald, podia ter feito um nascido trouxa que seria melhor, e Gellert jamais se arrependeria do que fez já que a primeira a 2 guerra mundial foi uma prova de que ele estava certo sobre os trouxas

1yr

Johan_The_Monster
Johan_The_MonsterLv2

he stole the Grindelwald grandson idea from another novel that just so happened to release a day before this one.

1yr
Quake_Midaro
Quake_MidaroLv14

Needs a complete rewrite and actual thought put into his wishes and development between stuffing 5 or so wishes in 1 then doubling ip the rest and the fact that apparently an untrained child regardless of his previous lifes memories can roundhouse kick and what not with no training is just poor writing author needs to take the time figure out what he wants his MC to start as and go from there don't try and be edgy or a hero or anything don't force it just feel it out and take your time to actually think about what you want the MC to be the hodgepodge of garbage wishes while they were individually good the fact you couldn't follow reality and inderstand 1 wish means just that 1 not 5 in 1 but 1 ruined any real expectations for the fic from the jump

1yr
Daniela_Medan
Daniela_MedanLv14

Please continue I really like it[img=update]

1yr
lolhehe101
lolhehe101Lv4

Like the idea so I hope you’ll continue

1yr
A_Bert
A_BertLv12

Yo autor you misspelled the title gust so you know

1yr
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