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BrightBrain256
BrightBrain256Lv32yr
2023-02-12 17:02

Nice work so far. Just that the paragraphs appear to long which is not recommendable for most user. Can't wait to see what Orion has in store in the upcoming chapters.

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BigSeb
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Thanks for letting me know! I’ll work on that in the future chapters to make it look nicer:)

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