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spoilers --I got a free trial preview and made it to chapter 31.the story kinda ends at 28...chapter 29 is called end/beginningand it continues like a new book with elements from the previous.Until 28 it seemed like everything was good; MC got back on his feet, got stronger, got a love interest, a new family, and an evil organization to fight. Then it goes from storytelling to a quick summary of everything going wrong.The author summarizes MC losing control to kill off his new family-- which will ruin his new romance. Not showing like a two chapter battle, but telling, like "He woke up, ripping out Roderick's heart." Yeah I suppose the crystal might have controlled his mind, or the system he swore to kill might have nerfed him again................I read three more chapters hoping for an explanation but it just rolls off in a different direction. Maybe I left too soon. You wrote the characters so well, I was invested in the characters and felt like they got flushed for a different story direction.

BECOMING AN IRREGULAR WITH A ROGUE SYSTEM

MrBoness

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I really loved your honest words, sincerely.And I can tell you, you definitely left too soon. first arc ends at Ch53, and by 54 there's more explanation on what happened, so if you'd like, you can go back to the story and keep your expectations.I definitely won't let you down on this story, I promise you ^^