Review Detail of youraveragebitch in The Moonlight Swordsman

I really like the descriptions used in the story. Each one feels unique in some way. Aizel has started out with having a pretty pessimistic outlook on life. I'm eager to see how this will change as he interacts with people in the fantasy world. What is also really cool is that he transitions between the two worlds periodically. Usually, in these type of stories, it goes only one way, so what the author has done with the premise is a breath of fresh air. Keep it up!