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2023-06-15 12:39

Let me start by saying that I have not even read the title of the first chapter, the only thing I have read is the synopsis. So here is my gripe with this novel from just reading the synopsis. The girl - the MOTHER to his daughter- doesn't want to announce their relationship cause SHE - the MOTHER - will get humiliated. I mean come on and he says give "Buy ALL the cooperative properties of her family and give it to my lovely miss". Do I have to spell out how many red flags that brings up? If this was a HP fanfic I would have thought that he was under the influence of Amortentia. Correct me if I am wrong and I WILL read it and edit my review, but till then its a no from me fam. Also all the ones giving this novel anything above a 1 star either cant read cause they haven't read the synopsis or are women who love shojo novels or are just insecure virgins like the MC of the novel (And before you correct me, I know the MC is not a virgin, I am calling you one. I can read unlike you.)

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