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This is a gem!!! Even though there are not many chapters right now, you should still give it a read. Now on to the review! I really like the way the author blends the magic (magecraft) systems of harry potter and fate, it makes a lot of sense when you look at it, and I can't wait to see how Virgil will use those two magic (magecraft) systems together in hogwarts I can't comment much on the stability of updates right now, but I can say that looking at the current pacing of chapters it will update one a day (not sure) The writing quality of the book is great! I can easily visualise the world that the character are in I have some trouble visualising some of the characters in my mind (like how they look like) but other than that I can say that the characters have a good depth to them! (though I would like more development on the main character) Overall 4.6/5 (Very Good!!!)

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Harry Potter: God of Magic

Grand_Magus_Shafiq

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Character discriptions and personalities are my weakness. Affected by my own peraonality I have it hard to express different ones.

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It is a problem all writers have, so it is completely understandable

Grand_Magus_Shafiq:Character discriptions and personalities are my weakness. Affected by my own peraonality I have it hard to express different ones.