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Review Detail of Kont_Archimedes in DOOMED TO BE A VILLAIN

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A lot of things were done in the novel that shouldn't have been done. Mc has a sensitive and ret.rdd system that insults him. Moreover, the author constantly makes Mc talk to the system. As a result, there is a lot of unnecessary conversation/dialog. Not to mention that the system is useless. The novel is full of popular culture references, jokes and mockery of clichés from other novels. Most of which, after a certain period of time, will leave you bored. Most of them are not FUNNY. Again, these jokes are even worse because they are between Mc and the sensitive system that makes the novel unbearable to read. What I find even more pathetic is that while the author references so many other clichéd villain novels, his Mc is no different from them. He took the system when he was 6 (in his 4th reincarnation, after being betrayed and Ntr'd in the 3rd...... I am no longer surprise these things). And his system told him that it would not be active for a few years. Then there was a time jump of 12 years. Okay, let's say for two years his system was inactive. The other 10 years??? I ask because even though the author has a Villain system, he still questions luck, system leveling up or system funcs when the protag shows up!!! What did you do for those 10 years after referring to all those stupid Chinese MCs? He doesn't even know about his role as a villain. The fact that he mentions all this when the protag shows up makes it too one-dimensional. The author has already set up the plot in his head without going into details and filled it with confusing time jumps and flashbacks to write a more stylistic piece. Due to his mediocre writing skills, he was unable to integrate them into the story as a whole. The other characters, including Mc, are one-dimensional and lack sufficient depth.

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