Review Detail of Reis123 in Shattered: A SAO Tale (Sword Art Online)

Item: Shattered: A SAO Tale (Sword Art Online)
Rating: 5

Review detail

Reis123Author1yrReis123

Well, we can't not have the shameless author review, can we? There's nothing much to say that hasn't already been said in the synopsis or in the first chapter. This is a novel I've been wanting to write for a long time, and I just finally got around to it. The MC is an original character, but he is just another player in SAO, and won't overshadow Kirito, nor will he know anything about the future. Also, the Kirito X Asuna pairing still stands, but for the other girls who are kept pinning for Kirito in the original, I plan on changing things. What exactly, even I am unsure. That's about it. I hope you enjoy, and please leave suggestions, comments, and reviews!

Shattered: A SAO Tale (Sword Art Online)

Reis123

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Luk_72634Lv1Luk_72634

Hahahaha

Kw0z:He literally says in the review that that’s not happening. Idiot.

9mth

Daoist_LakeLv4Daoist_Lake

author, if you make Original Character, please insert image OC for future reference, so reader know how to imagine character and their interaction

1yr

Reis123AuthorReis123

That's in the works. Can't promise when exactly it will be ready, but at some moment it will happen

Daoist_Lake:author, if you make Original Character, please insert image OC for future reference, so reader know how to imagine character and their interaction

1yr

DaimyooLv1Daimyoo

Türk müsün knk ?

1yr

Reis123AuthorReis123

Nope, I'm Brazilian. It was fun putting that through Google translator!

Daimyoo:Türk müsün knk ?

1yr

Gesonel_The_DuckLv1Gesonel_The_Duck

feliz que vc voltou chefe !!!!

1yr

JustS0me0neFrenchLv4JustS0me0neFrench

to me, Drifter looks like this (a bit less evil-ish), is it close to what you have in mind ?

1yr

Godfire_DragneelLv13Godfire_Dragneel

Author, can we get a Drifter X Argo? please 🥺🥺 I'll provide power stones everyday 🥺

11mth

2312_Haemsky_2312Lv132312_Haemsky_2312

i hope the pairing will be MCxASuNA

10mth

TheManCandyLv13TheManCandy

20 years old male pinning for a 14 year old (Clearly a minor) female. Yeah... I see no problem there.

Godfire_Dragneel:Author, can we get a Drifter X Argo? please 🥺🥺 I'll provide power stones everyday 🥺

9mth

Godfire_DragneelLv13Godfire_Dragneel

Yes, nothin' wrong here.

TheManCandy:20 years old male pinning for a 14 year old (Clearly a minor) female. Yeah... I see no problem there.

9mth

Kw0zLv14Kw0z

He literally says in the review that that’s not happening. Idiot.

2312_Haemsky_2312:i hope the pairing will be MCxASuNA

9mth

DrakuLykosLv15DrakuLykos

Will Mc be weaker than Kirito? Is that what you mean by not overshadow or do you mean Kirito will be a big part of the story?

7mth

Reis123AuthorReis123

No, he might be weaker at the start, simce Kirito is a beta-tester and used to games while he is not, but he quickly gets stronger. By saying the mc won't overshadow Kirito, I mean that he won't be overpowered. SAO is, at the core, about teamwork and whatnot, and that is also a big part of the fanfic

DrakuLykos:Will Mc be weaker than Kirito? Is that what you mean by not overshadow or do you mean Kirito will be a big part of the story?

7mth

Nuruddin_NaszriLv13Nuruddin_Naszri

can u revive Eugeo pls

5mth

Romance_guyLv13Romance_guy

Is fl useless?

Reis123:No, he might be weaker at the start, simce Kirito is a beta-tester and used to games while he is not, but he quickly gets stronger. By saying the mc won't overshadow Kirito, I mean that he won't be overpowered. SAO is, at the core, about teamwork and whatnot, and that is also a big part of the fanfic

4mth

dankokuLv4dankoku

No, she's quite broken, got a passive party healing skill.

Romance_guy:Is fl useless?

2mth

DaoistOfeOTALv4DaoistOfeOTA

Who is it? (Please tell me not an oc)

dankoku:No, she's quite broken, got a passive party healing skill.

1mth

dankokuLv4dankoku

Won't spoil it for you but it's not an OC

DaoistOfeOTA:Who is it? (Please tell me not an oc)

1mth

DaoistOfeOTALv4DaoistOfeOTA

Just spoil me it’s fine

dankoku:Won't spoil it for you but it's not an OC

1mth