Review Detail of Akiii365 in Leveling Up With My Pet
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Hello readers, Author here. This is the first novel I have written. Treat this review as a Q&A page. Comment your questions, I will try to answer as long as it does not contain spoilers.
Leveling Up With My Pet
Akiii365
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can you create a new story that is antiharem. story about a man that transmigrator into a reality with a heaven defining ability (cheat code) he conquers everything. when he reached the peak of his life. he discover another word Invaders a creatures from other realities. before the battle even began he was betrayed by his heroines then he discovered that all the heaven defining ability that he have. was given to him by the another invaders. with the last strength he has. he escaped the battlefield and fled because he don't have enough life force. but before he died he choose to create a system. a system that is going to help he's host to get more power so he use his having defining ability and the will of his own reality and other word reality. this is just the beginning of the story you can choose how the story will go and how is going to end I hope you like it this is just the creation of the system so you can make the system so overpowered please. antiharem please
Yeah I've yet to see one "good" harem. There's exactly one story I read where the harem wasn't full on detrimental to the story but even then it would have been way better without the harem.
RainbowBeheader:yeah nope my faith for writers to write good harem novel died few years back
Chimee_Chieke:can you create a new story that is antiharem. story about a man that transmigrator into a reality with a heaven defining ability (cheat code) he conquers everything. when he reached the peak of his life. he discover another word Invaders a creatures from other realities. before the battle even began he was betrayed by his heroines then he discovered that all the heaven defining ability that he have. was given to him by the another invaders. with the last strength he has. he escaped the battlefield and fled because he don't have enough life force. but before he died he choose to create a system. a system that is going to help he's host to get more power so he use his having defining ability and the will of his own reality and other word reality. this is just the beginning of the story you can choose how the story will go and how is going to end I hope you like it this is just the creation of the system so you can make the system so overpowered please. antiharem please
why did the writing style completely change at chapter 257 it has made me no longer want to read. instead of normal phrases like enjoying each other's company it has changed to things live revel in joyous comradarie a d it's the majority of that, I have checked a few chapters past that as well and it's still the same. hate to say it but probably won't continue reading this novel anymore.
Dacendaren:why did the writing style completely change at chapter 257 it has made me no longer want to read. instead of normal phrases like enjoying each other's company it has changed to things live revel in joyous comradarie a d it's the majority of that, I have checked a few chapters past that as well and it's still the same. hate to say it but probably won't continue reading this novel anymore.