webnovel
Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv61yr
2023-08-08 23:08

this is terrible to be honest. I'm disappointed to admit that my boredom led to me reading quite a bit of the story.the grammar is not unforgivable. however it is poor. (given how the app reacts to my keyboard, I've given up on making sure all first words to my sentences are capitalized. additionally, it's rather annoying when my punctuation doesn't work on the first tap then gets placed a space away on the second tap)back to the review.i actually don't want to continue with that. the story is just disappointing and I want to let you know that this is probably not the writing you would like.or i could be mistaken and all the positive reviews might be the majority and you who are reading my review.

Leveling Up With My Pet

Akiii365
4.3
495 Chs

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Akiii365
Akiii365Author

Hello readers, Author here. This is the first novel I have written. Treat this review as a Q&A page. Comment your questions, I will try to answer as long as it does not contain spoilers.

1yr

Tsniper
TsniperLv15

*Posible spoiler but minor* I really do enjoy some of the aspects of this story, but for being a parallel earth with a system, I can't help but think something is lacking. Strong start ✅️, solid relationship ✅️, ambitions ✅️. I feel like the interaction between MC and pet is lacking also with the system. His pet feels like an afterthought when MC just needs money and the system just updates on the pet. MC stats should have changed some physical attributes due to him being like 100x stronger than pro athletes. I guess I'm being a little tough with this because I don't want this novel to be dropped or fail.

1yr
Ninestar619_5803
Ninestar619_5803Lv4

This book is great. I enjoyed it from the frist start and will keep reading it. The story plot is very interesting. Not to mention, even the writing style, it's too easy to flow. A fan of this stories types and this one will be great. Will be excited to see the bond between the master and pet. Great book author

1yr
TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

Reveal spoiler

1yr
SomDxD
SomDxDLv3

The novel is good to read. It is simple and easy to read. The main character Liu Yong gets powerful through his only pet. Give it a try!

1yr
Soka_
Soka_Lv3

Wow, such a great read. It's really amazing how the story has great turn of events. Wish to see more of it. Keep it up author🥰. Will recommend to my friends too. Sending lots of love and support 😋😋😋

1yr
Vimbai_Murindagomo
Vimbai_MurindagomoLv1

An interesting tale of one man's struggle, with a creative twist. It a well paced story which many people can easily associate with. Well done

1yr
Zaraki
ZarakiLv1

wow, especially the plot of the story is fantastic ! I would love to read the upcoming chapters of this book. keep the Good work author 👍

1yr
VampireQueen1911
VampireQueen1911Lv11

The story is really nice. 😊 I really like it. 🐢

1yr
DJxoxo
DJxoxoLv1

"Wow, what a powerful opening to the novel! Chapter 1 really sets the tone for the rest of the story and I'm already hooked. The vivid descriptions and dynamic characters have me eagerly anticipating what's to come. Can't wait to see what unfolds in the next chapter!"

1yr
Related Stories

Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

After being hit by a car, Oliver wakes up only to find himself reincarnated as the 4th young master in one of the most powerful clans in the world. However, just after his birth, he is declared to be useless by his mother. Devastated, he later realizes that he has been born into the world of a novel that he used to read. This world is plagued by war between exorcists and demons, where only the strong survive while the weak are devoured. In such a cruel world where death is only a mile away, he, born without talent, is expected to only suffer his whole life until he hears it... [Ding! Conditions met. Binding System has been activated.] A system that guarantees a 10x reward... [Ding! Target has awakened one of the 4 special eyes!] [Obtaining 10 times the reward....] [Host has awakened the...] It is not only a matter of time before he can reach the top of the world and live comfortably! _____________________________ Patreon: https://tinyurl.com/winterdragon573 Discord server: https://discord.gg/YXHmERu2mH

WinterDragon_1 · Fantasy
4.5
260 Chs

Global Beast Mastery: Only I Can See the Hints

Charles transmigrated to the Beast Mastery World and became a Beast Master. At the beginning, he participated in the Beast Awakening Ceremony, where there were thousands of pets with varying qualities. Which one should he choose? At the start, he participates in the Tamer Awakening Ceremony, with thousands of pets of varying qualities. Which one should he choose? Fortunately, he has awakened a system that allows him to see hints that only he can perceive. "Hint: 【The Double Sword Praying Mantis】, Lv1, decent skills but low quality, insufficient for later stages..." "Hint: 【The Four-Winged Tiger】, Lv1, strong and robust but timid, may abandon its master and run away..." "Hint: 【The Frost Wolf】, Lv5, Gold quality, extremely rare with both Ice and Fire attributes..." Charles: "I want to make a contract with the Frost Wolf!" Teacher: "The success rate for the first contract is 100%, which is very rare. Are you sure about your choice?" Guild: "This Frost Wolf is weak and has poor combat ability. Are you sure you don't want to reconsider?" Charles: "No need to reconsider. It’s the one!"

Yellowpuppy · Fantasy
4.7
352 Chs

Lord of Mysteries

With the rising tide of steam power and machinery, who can come close to being a Beyonder? Shrouded in the fog of history and darkness, who or what is the lurking evil that murmurs into our ears? Waking up to be faced with a string of mysteries, Zhou Mingrui finds himself reincarnated as Klein Moretti in an alternate Victorian era world where he sees a world filled with machinery, cannons, dreadnoughts, airships, difference machines, as well as Potions, Divination, Hexes, Tarot Cards, Sealed Artifacts… The Light continues to shine but mystery has never gone far. Follow Klein as he finds himself entangled with the Churches of the world—both orthodox and unorthodox—while he slowly develops newfound powers thanks to the Beyonder potions. Like the corresponding tarot card, The Fool, which is numbered 0—a number of unlimited potential—this is the legend of "The Fool."

Cuttlefish That Loves Diving · Fantasy
4.8
1409 Chs

SSS rank Mother-In-Law to an Invincible Family

[sexual content and lemons warning] Warning: Sexual content, lemons, Comedy, MILFs, Genius Mc and his harem. Possessive MC, Large Harem, Capable Harem members, No Conscience towards men, Mc is a Chill guy until anything happens to his women. ~×~×~×~×~×~×~×~×~×~×~×~×~ I GOT CLICHED!!!. When Xu Qianghua opened his eyes, he found out that he was reborn back in time before the game Immortal Odyssey: Paths of Destiny merged with his world. With only a few items left with him, Xu Qianghua is stunned and unhappy because he had a good life and was not like those who either betrayed or died to some really powerful monster. Until he saw the introduction of them: Family Token (Chaos): A small world with Immortal veins and high-level spirit crystal mines…. Key of the Ancients(Chaos): A mini-world with infinite monsters and riches to collect…. While Xu Qianghua also deals with his wives Xu Qianghua: Mother-in-law this is wrong Sister Meiying: This is not wrong, I need to check if my daughter can be satisfied. The jumps on Xu Qianghua After a few hours Liu Anwei: Brother Qiang, what were you talking with my mom about? Xu Qianghua: Nothing, your mother wanted you to have a new sibling, so she asked for my help Liu Anwei: What? Read as Xu Qianghua and his now new try again with a different path from his past life which might lead them to ruin or become the strongest family out there. ….. No NTR ..... PS: This is my first novel so I will have a lot of mistakes, so if you find any please feel free to comment and I will fix it as soon as possible. ....... Discord Link: https://discord.gg/9yEfZx3hEa

Anime_timez24 · Fantasy
4.4
350 Chs

The Conquerors Path

Love, lust, and desire... Austin didn't know much about all that in his past life, for he was average in all aspects of his life. A guy who took psychology and math to learn because he couldn't get into biology, the only exciting thing about him being the fact that when he died, he ended up in his favorite eroge game with the task of getting the girls and making the protagonist a loner. Love, like manipulation or time in hell... That was his choice from the God Of Games... The beautiful girls of tsunderes, the sadist, the masochist, the kuudere, and the...yandere, and more. A world with living, breathing women of high status and power who don't like to share... So what happens when Austin goes behind them?... What happens when the Gods that feel nothing feel for him? What happens when he becomes the gigolo of the Gods?... Well, come and find out as he tried to survive among all the crazy women that exist... [There will be a lot of sex scenes, but it might only start after about 60 or so chapters.] (Note: Hey, first of all, this is not a fanfiction! It's true that the beginning of the story and some parts resemble some novels, but none of the characters are related to others from the novel. Also, the story flow will become completely different later!! Again, not a fanfic! The image does not belong to me; if the creator wants to remove it, message me.) My Discord: https://discord.gg/XyYvJ389mg

Chaosking · Fantasy
4.6
864 Chs

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Living a normal life is boring, but I was happy with what I had. Even when I spent most of my life in regret and misery, I lived because I had someone that I loved dearly. And that said someone took my life... But fate had different plans for me... As if death wasn't enough for me. As if the gods were mocking me. I got reincarnated into a hardcore romance game that I used to play. That too when the prequel game that I played the most ended twenty-five years ago. A game where death is everyone's mistress. A game that people either liked or hated too much. Now reincarnated into the body of the Villainess's son. I became someone that I hated the most... "Hahaha..." I laughed at my own misery. As if that too wasn't enough, I also became the slave of someone else's desires. Now, one might say a mother is a mother even if the world sees her as a Villainess. But what if your mother is the very incarnation of evil? That your mother is the hurdle that you have to overcome? What if your mother is the very reason you might die? Gentleness and love are the last things one could expect from her. "Hahaha..." Again, a hollow laugh escaped my lips as the realization dawned on me. That I have been... Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son... =============================== [Discord link:- https://discord.gg/5Vgw4JCrBW]

Noob6_writer9 · Fantasy
4.3
295 Chs
Login