It was such a great book .The book is a Simple one without much fantasy or stuffs or a super strong ml or fl but showing how a ordinary boy think and from their his expectations. It's a must read if you want some real life stuff

I love how this romcom balance the serious out with comedy... this had been very lacking in other rom-coms.. this is quite good so far the doctor part had me laughing holding my belly. Author keep up the good work I am looking forward for more!! thanks for this novel.

I think this novel had great potential, humor is nice and easy to understand, maybe even relatable for some, the MC character development is amazing.. As always great book.

It felt off in beginning but picked up pace in the third chapter. The humor is good, could leave off words like manga and romcom. Interesting read, would love to see where the story lands, and best wishes to the author.[img=recommend]

Hi there! I just want to say that I found myself laughing numerous times as I was reading your novel. It reminds me of Japanese humor which is exactly my cup of tea. However, I would like to point out some flaws that I found specifically like not capitalizing the first letter in a sentence (which was prominent in the first chapter), excessive usage of question marks, or exclamation points [??/!!] where a single one would suffice (though I think this is your author's intention to make it humorous)[this might be a "Me" thing that turned me off so you can take this opinion for a grain of salt]. As for the style of writing, I believe that it actually improved over time! The latest chapter (as of the time of writing this review) is better than the first chapter, in my honest opinion. Please keep up the good work and continue writing with a humorous flare!

Been reading some of the chapters. It has a good story development. And a whole lot of humor. Would definitely want to read more. Hoping for the best to the author. Keep it up!

I think this novel has a nice potential, its not a fantasy novel but it gets you hooks by a simple setting which revolves aroun the world of a simple boy and his eveyday life.

While I'm not used to reading romance, I'll try to review this as objectively as I can. First, the writing quality is somewhat shaky, especially toward the start. I noticed a lot of uppercases in the middle of a sentence, a lowercase at the beginning of some, and a rather liberal use of ellipses. Still, it gets better as the story goes on, and there's a sharp increase in quality by Chapter 9. Second, the updates don't seem that stable, with the latest chapter published eleven days ago. However, writing is hard, and I can wholly empathize with the author on this one. Third, the plot develops at a reasonably good pace, even fast by some standards, but that's good in and of itself for this format. The story has a cozy atmosphere, something I could imagine myself reading in the comfort of my covers, which is the goal of most romcoms, I'd argue. Fourth, the characters are the driving point for this book. They're expressive, anime-like (which isn't a bad thing), and all-around fun to watch interact among themselves, especially Koi and Airi. Lastly, the world background is still vague up to the point where I stopped, but since it's a contemporary romance, I guess it's not and should not be the story's focus. All-in-all, an entertaining read. I'm sure the author will get better with time, but his foundations are already solid.

This story has some strong potential behind it, the characters are intriguing and interesting with a beautiful setup to the overall story. Writing quality is good. Author includes all punctuation helping the story flow really well. The descriptions used for the characters really help to form the image of them in your mind. Especially love how well the author wrote in the Japanese setting nailing alot of the terminology. Story development is steady but well done, allowing the story to flow naturally as it might for people in similar situations. The character design is really enjoyable to read through, the dynamics established between characters is really well established showing their interactions clearly. The authors premise of kindness being a main theme is so good in my opinion. Showing the effects of kindness clearly. As well as clearly depicting the influence the protagonists parents had on him. Updating stability is strong, 11 chapters already out and still going. The author clearly takes his time between each chapter release. Giving each chapter it's necessary attention. The world background is done to a great standard. The Japanese setting is taken full advantage of using all the terminology needed to paint a picture. The world events used are well done for this aswell. having real locations that would make sense in this setting. All in all this story has a lot of potential behind it. The author has only just begun. But I can't wait to see where they go with this :D