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MrAvacado
MrAvacadoLv14d
2024-11-21 00:08

The story idea is really good. It would have been a great novel but names like testa,shuna sounds cringe and word "san" makes the reading unbearable. It's sad that you ruined your story with these elements and I am ignoring the grammatical errors

Hello Detective

Nie1i
4.4
24 Chs

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Nie1i
Nie1iAuthor

thnx for your honest opinion I will try to make it better(san is used because I like japanese very much )

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