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Review Detail of DaoistKi1lA4 in You're My Mate

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Very good story with nice flow. The only thing that gave this a lower grade was the comic book words that express a action or feeling. Those could have been written in ta sentence instead.

You're My Mate

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Thank you for the feedback! I'll work harder and keep that in mind 💓