The story seems good, writing quality can be a lot better....But the thing that frustrates me is that chapters are way too short. It would be greatly appreciated if you merge 3-4 of your chapters and then release them as one...
Satan03
Liked it!
LIKESatan03:I'll improve my writing quality since you've advised it, just wait and watch. as for chapter length right now I am writing like 2000 words per chapter do you still want me to increase the length ?image
kade_of_the_conk:Eh.. a good story can always have longer chapters you know...image